Review my essay

<p>Its about a quick 600 word paper. The propt is tell us your story. Your advise will be awesome. ^:)^ </p>

<p>i’m happy to review it…i’m a decent editor, if a bit blunt. :slight_smile: </p>

<p>Thanks man!
:-bd </p>

<p>Professional proofreader - I’ll take a look for you.</p>

<p>Thanks @200Jamie</p>

<p>So i’m not sure if this is the right forum but I am preparing my personal statement for universities and am wondering just how personal I should get. I come from a very unstable past of substance abuse and incarceration both personally and within my family. Are there certain things I should be cryptic about or should I just put it all out there? Thoughts…</p>

<p>Don’t get so personal that you are literally throwing people under the bus.</p>