Review my USC essay

<p>My essay is due today and I was wondering if anyone could give me some feedback on my essay? I'm looking for someone to read it that doesn't actually know me like my friends do.</p>

<p>It would be a big help if you had Aim or yahoo messenger so that it will be easier to send me some advice/criticism </p>

<p>Post here or PM me if you are willing to read. Thanks</p>

<p>PM me,I have read some,both on CC and for my friends........I will try to get it back asap....</p>

<p>i'll take a look</p>

<p>maill it here...im willing to read</p>

<p>my aim screenname is elementsk8er070</p>

<p>If one of you guys have aim, send me a message and I'll send you the file</p>

<p>I will read it if you would like. I'm an '09 Transfer student (not applying to this school thought), so if you do not feel comfortable or you want to wait and see if anyone else wants to read it that's fine. Whatever your decision just PM me.</p>

<p>I sent out a few PM's. If you could get back to me ASAP, that would be great</p>

<p>Once again, Thanks</p>

<p>Another quick way to reach me is by email. <a href="mailto:element070@yahoo.com">element070@yahoo.com</a></p>