<p>Hello!
I was wondering if some kind people would be willing to review my Yale essays- that is, the short 100 word answer "Why Yale" & the long, 500 word supplemental essay. For my "Why Yale" one, I did a "Top 10 Reasons I Love Yale," which I feel insecure about because it naturally doesn't really go into depth about the reasons...
Also, I need to cut 35 words from the long essay to fit the strict 500 word limit.
Thanks!</p>
<p>Hi. You can run it by me. The answers should definitely be specific. It’s better to have 5 reasons than 10 shallow ones. </p>