Revise/Critique my essays? I'll return the favor!

College Essays
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<p>I have 3 essays I wrote for my college apps. Can anyone revise/critique them? I'll return the favor gladly. thanks!</p>

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<p>Ill be glad to revise them. Can you revise mine as well?</p>

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<p>Sure! Pm me your email.</p>

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<p>Ok its done!</p>

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<p>They censored out the domain name of your email. Try spacing it?</p>

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<p>I hope my information about your essay helped! I Pmed my thoughts on your essay! It will be helpful if you can do the same for my essay. I will gladly appreciate it!</p>

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<p>I will be glad to. Send me them! Read mine as well!</p>

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<p>I’d love to read them. PM me!</p>