Rice Application Essay (Why the department?)

<p>Hi,</p>

<p>I'm new to this forum, and I just recently completed my Rice application essay, and I'm feeling as if my long essay (What perspective do you feel that you will contribute to life at Rice?) is very weak...,</p>

<p>are any accepted EDers or current students willing to proofread over my essay for me?</p>

<p>Thank you so much, and Merry Christmas!
(I'm such a loser for writing essays on christmas D: )</p>

<p>DL</p>

<p>Don’t worry If it’s weak. My short answers were TERRIBLE. And I got in . Don’t focus so much on one part of your app. Gl</p>

<p>I’d love to read it. Just PM it to me.</p>

<p>I’m applying RD to the arch. department, so I don’t have to write that essay. I’ll read it if you’ll read my answer to part B :)</p>