SAT Essay- Can someone review and grade?

By the way idk why its made stars but I said “trollling” I didnt call you anything else

I have seen many student essays with grades between 5 and 9. I don’t think this one can be worse than an 8, because a grader cannot give it less than a 4. OP’s tutor agrees with me. Woandering, what grade would you give it and why?

There were several serious problems with this essay and I think OP learned from posting here. Isn’t that the main point?

Who’s OP @sattut‌

Original poster, vmiller7723, you.