<p>This is for the SAT Writing. Answers to questions:</p>
<p>I dont remember any, lol, so when you guys give me some, I will keep updating the list</p>
<p>1 ...Monkey's through sign language.. -- Correct
2 Mosque question-- Correct
3 Hemingway question -- more/most unified (Controversy on this)
4 Shadow puppets.... for the delegates to the United Nations (tense error for will present)
5 The Era of Greek tyrants, who ruled.... (No error??)
6 "As the movie starts......emerges from the bleak...horses..etc".. (change emerges to emerge)
7 With his research paper deadline fast approaching, Derek's final decision was to write about labor unions in the United States..' (Change Derek's final decision to Derek finally decided to.."
8 Between XXXX to YYYY.... (change to to and)</p>
<p>Coffee Passage</p>
<p>1 Delete nevertheless
2 Coffeehouse... "the debate would continue into the night"
3 "The authorities' fear of coffee drinking" may seem ridiculous</p>
<p>I think the whole sentence was written in future tense, so I put to. My reason for to is because the sentence says ...will present puppet shows for the delegates to the United Nations. Changing to the to to a from or of makes the sentence sound better.</p>
<p>Edit: Ok, now I dont even remember whether I put the tense or the 'idiom error'</p>
<p>Yeah, there was an /awful/ tense error on the delegate UN one. It said something like
"The puppet guy WILL PRESENT a show to the delegates ... EARLIER THIS YEAR."</p>
<p>On the Greek tyrant one, I put A-- there was nothing wrong with it, right?..</p>
<p>topick19: there was this other question about 'being dependent to'
i said it was wrong because i thought it was dependent on
the question was about this girl who wanted to be independent but something until she found a job i think...</p>
<p>Coffee passage #3 is wrong. The paragraph was talking about the Kings and legislation, the authorities (police) were mentioned as a sidenote in the beginning. The sentence was referring to coffee's ban by Kings. The paragraph went something like this: "Although it may seem ridiculous, it was justified. Coffehouses stirred up anti-monarch sentiments which posed a serious danger to King Henry..."</p>
<p>i don't quite remember the greek tyrant question... wasn't there something wrong with the original that had to with singular/plural? like "the era of ... MARK..."?</p>