Seeking Yale Supp Essay Critique!

College Essays
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<p>Hi CC,</p>

<p>I'd like an honest critique of my essay. It's pretty short, and I'm wondering if that will be a drawback.</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

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<p>Sure Id love to see it! Just PM me!</p>

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<p>Me too. Send it to me.</p>

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<p>I’ve sent it to you both! Thank you so much for the feedback :’)</p>

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<p>I’ll check it out</p>

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<p>bump 10char</p>

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<p>PM me, I’ll read it!</p>