<p>[ size=+2][ color=orange][ b]Decision: Waitlisted[ /b][ /color][ /size]</p>
<p>[ b]Objective:[ /b][ list]
[ *] SAT I (breakdown): CR:480 M:710 W:560 Total: 1750
[ *] ACT:
[ *] SAT II:
[ *] Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0):
[ *] Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): 5/159
[ *] AP (place score in parenthesis): AP Gov(3), AP Biology, AP Psychology, AP US History
[ *] IB (place score in parenthesis):
[ *] Senior Year Course Load: English Composition I, English Composition II, Calculus I, Calculus II, AP Biology, AP Psychology, AP US History, Studio Art II
[ *] Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.):National Honors Society, Honorable Mention All Conference for XC, Distinction in Art </p>
<p>[ /list][ b]Subjective:[ /b][ list]
[ *] Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis): varsity XC, varsity track, character club, math team, robotic team, Tutoring
[ *] Job/Work Experience: Cashier and Order take for a year
[ *] Volunteer/Community service: Organize library for elementary school students, collect money for needs (such as relay for life, penny for patient), Reading to elementary school students.
[ *] Summer Activities:
[ *] Essays: I think the essay might be the problem, because everything I wrote in the essay is the truth, and sometimes people don’t like to listen to the truth. I moved to the U.S. four years ago, and I have terrible relationships with my parents, who want me to work instead of doing well in school. Despite my parents’ opposition, I work hard in school, from ESL classes in my fresheman year, to Honors English in my sophomore year and eventually to English Composition I and Composition II (College level courses) in my Senior year. Maybe it is my grievance. Because of my unbearable grievance of truth that they think I am a disgraceful child who doesn’t know who to appreciate the wrold. I do appreciate the world. I understand that the world is filled with colors and hope; I just need to see the world from a different angle. I am trying, to replace the grievance with love, but who can lend me a hand. (You can feel compassionate with me but don’t feel sympathy towards me. Even though I am on the wait list, but I don’t think weather you are accepted or rejected can measure your ability and your true self.)<br>
[ *] Teacher Recommendation: They are really nice. (from two of my favorate teacher)
[ *] Counselor Rec: It is fine also.
[ *] Additional Rec:
[ *] Interview:</p>
<p>[ /list][ b]Other[ /b][ list]
[ *] Applied for Financial Aid?: Yes
[ *] Intended Major: English
[ *] State (if domestic applicant): NJ
[ *] Country (if international applicant):
[ *] School Type: Public School
[ *] Ethnicity: Asian
[ *] Gender: Femal
[ *] Income Bracket:30,000
[ *] Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): first generation college</p>
<p>[ /list][ b]Reflection[ /b][ list]
[ *] Strengths: My senior course load
[ *] Weaknesses: SAT and AP scores
[ *] Why you think you were accepted/waitlisted/rejected: I think the fact that I can’t give them a promise what I will do in my future is one of my weaknesses. I think before I go to college, I must find myself first.
[ *] What other schools have you been accepted to/plan on going? TCNJ
[ /list][ b]General Comments:[ /b] 1)Never give up. 2)You are who you are, please trust yourself.</p>