So apparently my essay makes me sound psychotic, can anyone take a look at it?

<p>I'm applying to a conservative catholic school as a liberal outspoken person. My essay definitely reflects who I am, however I don't really know if that's a good thing in terms of the school I'm applying to. Would anyone be willing to take a look at this essay and give me some honest feedback?
Thanks in advance.</p>

<p>I will take a look at it,and tell you whether its a risky essay or not
pm me</p>