Common App Essay too Liberal?

[kendizzle]

Hello all. I’ve written my essay for the common app, but I’m worried that it’s a little too liberal/feminist/rant-Y. I think it’s well written so far, but I don’t want to close any doors for myself. Any advice? Thanks!

Also, if anyone would like to read them, please PM me

[hhjjlala]

If you’re applying to an ultra-conservative school, be worried. If you’re applying to an ultra-liberal school, don’t be worried.