<p>Please no new members, I prefer someone whos already in college or have been on CC for a while. I am really protective of my stuff. That being said, anyone willing to critique my essay, considering its the first draft, ignore the bad grammar, just content wise.</p>
<p>I’ve edited quite a few essays on here, and I can read yours if you’d like.</p>
<p>Thank you Careful. Would anyone else critique my essay?</p>
<p>i would like to read it if you …</p>
<p>Sorry, I would like someone who has been on here a bit longer and is active on other parts of the forums.</p>