Is someone willing to read my rough draft of my common app essay?

College Essays
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<p>I had some a good ideas (I thought) when I first starting writing, but they're not coming out right. My descriptions aren't nearly as good as I thought I could make them, and I'm kind of having writer's block.</p>

<p>Is anyone willing to read through it and give me some feedback on what I can improve/add? There are some parts where I don't finish a sentence or use all capitals, and this is because I don't like how the current sentence sounds and can't improve it at the moment.</p>

<p>Thanks for any help, guys.... even though you are all probably tired of reading people's essays ;)</p>

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<p>I’ll read it. PM me if you want.</p>

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<p>I’ll be glad to read it.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it and pm me</p>

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<p>I’ll critique; PM me</p>

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<p>I’ll be more than willing to help you, send me a pm!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it for you!</p>

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<p>I would be glad to give you feedback:) Val. in my high school:)</p>

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<p>I would ask one of my teachers.</p>

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<p>ill help u PM me</p>

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<p>i’ll read it!</p>