This month I’ve been rewriting my common app essay bc I wasn’t pleased with how it was before.
Can someone read over it to see if I need to expand/improve anything?
I asked a couple friends for feedback and their responses were mostly just the generic “it’s good” type of feedback, but one friend said that I was telling too much and not showing enough. Now I’m kind of worried that I might have to change a lot in my essay. I don’t have much time left bc my deadline is on Jan 31.
DM me a private link if you would like. I can surely help with grammar and/or structure issues.