<p>z7xfla:
When I say that my essays are decent but not extraordinary, I just mean that I am sure they are just as good as the average UCSD admit’s. They didn’t have any brilliant or clever hooks, but they were still well written and interesting.</p>
<p>For the first essay I wrote about my interests in music, sports, and medicine, and basically how each one has shaped my life and influenced my future. I threw in some anecdotes alluding to my volunteer work at VITAS hospice care center, my lifetime of playing violin and years spent in the school orchestra, and my focused studying of the sciences (trying to get them to notice my AP science scores). </p>
<p>My second essay was written about Cross Country, and I was trying to showcase my persistence and hard work. I wrote about my progress from freshman year, unable to make the team, to my senior year, where I’m now one of the top runners in varsity. I also wrote about how running related to my lifestyle and taught me valuable life lessons: how to handle winning and losing, keeps me healthy, do my best at everything I attempt, etc. It’s may all seem a bit clich</p>