SPEECH ESSAY - Common App Personal Statement

College Essays
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<p>Hi there! I'm looking for people to read and critique my first draft of an essay I'm looking to develop. This essay is on Speech as an extracurricular and how it has affected me.</p>

<p>I don't have a conclusion yet, so I'm definitely looking for some suggestions there (and throughout, obviously). Again, this is a first draft, so feel free to tear it apart, ha ha..</p>

<p>Let me know! Thanks in advance. :)</p>

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<p>Bumpppppp.</p>

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<p>I’d be happy to read!</p>

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<p>Anybody else? Please?</p>

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<p>…?</p>

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<p>I’m willing to read it, but full disclosure: I’m in high school as well.</p>

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<p>I can read it for you</p>