Never thought I’d be able to victoriously post one of these!
I am the One Average Kid in the thread. Like the past Average Kids of yore, whom I encountered many a time myself while sifting through the bogs of CC, my duty is to inspire hope in the next generation. Never give up.
Decision: ACCEPTED!
Objective:
SAT I (breakdown):2170
ACT (breakdown): Composite: 35, ENG: 36, MATH: 33, READING: 36, SCIENCE: 34, WRITING: 31
SAT II: Literature 770, Math 2 800
Unweighted GPA: 3.67 (not even top 20% in my school. Maybe not even top 25%)
Weighted GPA: 4.5 ish?
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): none available
AP (place score in parenthesis): AP US History (5,) AP Physics 1 & 2 (both 5s,) AP lang (5,) AP Calc BC (5)
IB (place score in parenthesis):
Senior Year Course Load: NOT EVEN HEAVY! AP Econ, AP Gov, AP Psych, AP Stats, HONORS physics (all my friends are taking AP sciences, but I opted out,) a NON-HONORS science next semester, a random writing elective, a STUDY HALL first semester, CHOIR, gym…
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): National Scholastic Art & Writing Fiction silver medal, YoungArts merit awardee (another national writing contest,) debate JV state champ, debate varsity state semifinalist, NMSF/AP scholar, presidential volunteer award. Around 15 regional writing awards/publications (though I only listed a few) and a couple random awards from the school district for being a good student lmao
Subjective:
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis): Debate, writing (did camps and workshops,) volunteered at Chinese school on weekends, was Toastmasters Youth Leadership (President) 3 years. Toastmasters was basically my only leadership. I also did a program one summer where I was leader of a team that taught chinese kids english for 2 weeks. I ran a book drive for that program earlier that year (collected around 200 books.) those were one-time events though.
Also was “social media manager” for my choir.
Also did some piano on the side (occasional accompanist for theatre recitals and talent show)
Job/Work Experience: none
Volunteer/Community service: volunteering at local chinese school & previously mentioned summer stuff
Summer Activities: Iowa Young Writers Studio, Interlochen Fine Arts Camp (writing major,) Winter Tangerine Review Summer Workshop, ChinaWay volunteer organization
Essays (rating 1-10, details): 10/10. If I had a ticket into Stanford I knew it would have to be my essays. I am a writer so I pride myself on my writing.I knew this was my one hope. I polished these babies till I shone. I opted for “funny” for all of them. I didn’t really try to impress rather than entertain, entertain, entertain. So they were all purely joke-based, casual, personable. I think they were taken aback by that, and this is what got me in.
Recommendations (rating 1-10, details):
Teacher Rec #1: 8.5/10? My English teacher. She didn’t like me at first but by the end of the year I’d say we were tight. Tight enough for me to ask her to write my letter, at least. I also did some extra work for her (helped her plan some classes, performed in a fundraiser she organized, etc.)
Teacher Rec #2: 8.5/10? My French teacher. I’ve had her for three years. I didn’t participate much in her class the last year. Not sure if that made that onto the letter. But she is very nice so I’m sure the letter wasn’t very negative. Also, I was homecoming queen and I got her to mention that in the rec letter so maybe that helped me.
Counselor Rec: Maybe 6/10, maybe 9/10. He likes me, but he likes all the kids. I can’t tell if he would go out of his way to write me a non-generic one or not.
Additional Rec: 8.5/10 My writing teacher from Iowa Young Writers Studio. She is accomplished (New York Times, Paris Review) and I participated a lot in her class.
Interview: eh. lasted 30 minutes, was kind of awkward. didn’t seem to go as well as other peoples’ interviews.
Other
Applied for Financial Aid?:Yes
Intended Major:Undecided/Creative Writing
State (if domestic applicant):IL
Country (if international applicant):
School Type: Large public (3000-ish), ranked near-top 100 in country
Ethnicity:ASIAN!!
Gender:Female
Income Bracket:100,000-150,000
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.):none
Reflection
Strengths: personality, humanities/arts focus, humor, essays, homecoming queen (maybe?), good test scores and decent ECs, some national/state awards in a non-STEM field, DID NOT APPLY AS STEM MAJOR
Weaknesses: grades (!!!) lack of significant leadership, MUCH easier course load compared to my friends, national awards not even that stellar (i basically got silver medals and honorable mentions.)
Why you think you were accepted/waitlisted/rejected: see: strengths.
Where else were you accepted/waitlisted/rejected: nowhere else yet
General Comments:
thrilled, stunned, and blessed. don’t give up! Stanford only accepts 1% of students with GPAs under 3.7. If you play your cards right you can be in that 1% with me.
market yourself smartly. try to find an angle and cast yourself in that angle and drive that point home. If you’re good at art (even if you don’t identify as purely ‘artsy,’) drive home the message: i’m artsy. i’m artsy. i’m artsy. that gives the officers almost a “tag line” to remember you by, and also it makes you seem like you have a very strong identity.
I tried to market myself as witty and creative. I think that’s what got me in.
five other students from my school applied, however, and were rejected. all of them are as or more academically qualified than me, with stellar extracurriculars. just because you don’t get in doesn’t mean you aren’t smart or capable or won’t love the college you attend!
i can’t believe I almost applied Early Decision to Brown. I was so close! dodged a bullet there.