Statement of Purpose (SOP)Help-Public Health

<p>Hello All:</p>

<p>I am a prospective applicant for SPHs and I am hoping to matriculate in 2012. Would anyone please give me any feedback on my SOP? Please message me if you are willing. I appreciate all constructive criticism. My statement is rather lengthy and I fear that I am not as focused as I should be....I am applying for an MPH and then hopefully continue towards doctoral work.</p>