<p>I'm heavily relying on my statement of purpose and experience for acceptance into MPH programs. I've written a rough draft but I feel like it's all over the place and doesn't stand out. Anyone want to take a look and help me out? I'll PM it.</p>
<p>Have you considered using an editing service ? I have used a few online services and they really help take the pressure off plus they really polish it to stand out. How long is your personal statement ?</p>