Students reviewing essays is nice, but I like the older crowd :D

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<p>So would anyone mind reading my main application essay? I plan on applying to these schools:</p>

<p>Reach:
Harvard
Wharton/ University of Pennsylvania
Stanford
Yale
Stern/NYU</p>

<p>Match:
McDonough/ Georgetown (Business)
Cornell Undergraduate Business Program
UVA
Tulane
Washington University in St Louis
Carroll/ Boston College (Business)</p>

<p>Safety
Boston University
McCombs/ University of Texas at Austin (Business)
University of Maryland: College Park </p>

<p>If you'd like to help, just post here, I really appreciate te help and sentiment!</p>

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<p>Email the essay (s) to me.</p>

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<p>I'll give you an honest opinion. PM me.</p>

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<p>Change the word "older" to "more experienced" , "wiser" or even "more sophisticated" and you might get more takers.</p>

<p>I don't like that word "old".</p>

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<p>Feel free to PM and I'll give you my honest feedback.</p>

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<p>Well I wanted to put experienced in the title, but it made my thread title to long. Sorry amount the distasteful word choice.</p>

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<p>We are older...We're the parents after all...I think Midmo was just teasing.</p>

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<p>I'll give it a shot - PM me</p>

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<p>Great essay DerrickA...I sent you a PM.</p>

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<p>I'd be glad to read it Derrick. PM me.</p>