Supplement Essay - Is it good?

Colleges and Universities A-Z University of Pennsylvania
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<p>So the supplement essay asks:</p>

<p>Which of the academic communities and social communities that now comprise the University of Pennsylvania are most interesting to you and how will you contribute to them and to the larger Penn community?</p>

<p>I wrote a one-page response to that. Would anyone be interested in reading it and giving me some comments? I feel really insecure about it :S</p>

<p>Thanks!!</p>

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<p>i’ll read!!! (not applying to penn if that makes you feel any better)</p>

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<p>I’ll read it if you’d like. I was deferred ED.</p>