<p>Hey guys,</p>
<p>I don't usually force my essay on others to edit (that usually takes my voice out of the essay), but I think this one merits some peer edit-age. </p>
<p>Like the title to this post said, this essay is from with the Penn Supplement with the prompt:</p>
<p>"Describe the courses of study and the unique characteristics of the University of Pennsylvania that most interest you. Why do these interests make you a good match for Penn?"</p>
<p>I personally think my response to this is ok, but generally I'm bad with "why do you like us essays." This isn't because I have to force myself to come up with reasons, but rather I never know how to insert my voice into them. I know that sounds contradictory, but that's the way it is.</p>
<p>Anyway, I'd really appreciate it if someone could take a look at it for me...any feedback would be appreciated.</p>