<p>My colleges really only want a paragraph for the supplements. So I pretty much need to say what I want to say as succinctly as I can. I'm not much of a fluffer in the first place, anyway, but are these supposed to be creatively written? A lot of the supplement questions spark creative thought in the first place, so if the idea is conveyed, then does it really matter if it's the most interestingly constructed paragraph the world has ever seen? </p>
<p>And as for the "What interested you in our school?" essay. For one school, would I be able to write that, during my interview, I was told that the school really takes advantage of the historical sites around it, and these cultural experiences are what I want? And then that I was talking to a student at their school, and she said that they develop writing skills very well in their students, which is something I really do look for in a school. Is that too much about the school and not enough about me? </p>
<p>Thanks!</p>