Take a look at my common app essay?

[b1zn3z]

<p>Could I get some critique/feedback on my personal statement for the common app? I'll PM it, thanks!</p>

[sarinner]

<p>I’ll read it!</p>

[Thebeatlestoday]

<p>I’d be honored!
I have several years of experience as a tutor and writing coach, and I’ve edited a bunch of essays on CC so far this summer, so hopefully I can be of help to you!</p>

[collegekid69]

<p>I’ll read it</p>

[IWillKillForMIT]

<p>I can read it.</p>

[emilieland]

<p>I’d be willing to read it! PM me it, or PM me asking for my email address so you can send it to me through there.</p>

[AiwfcDCI]

<p>Ill read it!!! PM me!</p>

[ameteorite]

<p>I can read it if you’d like.</p>

[antwanmon]

<p>Just pm me, i will read and critique it in no time</p>

[Lakerfan123]

<p>I can. 10char</p>