Theme of College Essays....

<p>I am heavily involved in community service/activism as in I was on a governing board that ran a 6 million budget as well as advisory councils for the school board. My question- does/ should my essay have to explain why I am so involved in the community? As in, what fuels my desire?</p>

<p>I already sent in my application and supplements that did not address why I was so involved but showed another side of me--how I think differently and who I am as a person (awkwardly funny, insecure but confident, etc). But now I am thinking that I made a huge mistake in not discussing why I involved myself into these activities. I listed them number one on my activities portion of the common app as well as told my guidance counselor to focus on that in my interview. </p>

<p>Is this okay? Thoughts, opinions, comments, critiques. Any response is welcome.</p>

<p>Yes… You should have done that. Because from what you just said, you merely explained your activities in your essay - something that should have been done in the short response of “please briefly elaborate one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences.” But you can call the college and see if they will accept additional documents from you to consider.</p>