Thoughts on my (unfinished) esssay?

College Essays
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<p>My essay is on the prompt: Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you.</p>

<p>Although unfinished, I'm curious what others have to say about what I've written thus far.</p>

<p>Thanks in advance for any that choose to help.</p>

<p>Just post in here or send me a pm and ill send you my essay.</p>

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<p>PM me bro 10char</p>

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<p>Sure, I’ll read it.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it!</p>

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<p>Sure pm away. I’ll give it a read.</p>