Title Ideas/ Harsh Editing & Feedback for Common App Essay!

<p>Hi everyone,
So I've just finished my second revision of my Common App essay, and I feel it has improved significantly. I'm now specifically looking for title ideas, however if you'd like to give me feedback that would be great too! Please be harsh and completely honest, I need this essay to be near perfect!
PM me if you're interested!</p>

<p>I can give you some ideas but I would like to ask if a title is necessary. I know many friends who never put a title but got accepted into great schools. However, all the essays I’ve read from books and helpful websites have titles. Can anyone provide feedback on this?</p>

<p>Sorry! I meant post here and I’ll PM you!</p>

<p>And iusechopsticks: I’m sure it’s not necessary, I just believe it lends creativity to the writing. I thinks it’s more of a personal preference thing.
I sent you the essay!</p>

<p>sure! 10char</p>

<p>I’ll help you out. PM me! However, you should help me out too xP</p>

<p>i’d be willing to read it if you pm it over.</p>