Hello fellow CC’ers. I have just finished polishing some of my rough drafts for admissions, and was hoping for some of y’all to put some input to these essays. Topics are listed below. Just PM me if interested. Also, I will gladly edit any essay you would like me to. I am tutor at my high school and I specifically assist freshman and younger in editing essays. I have already completed two years of College English, so I’m not some self-proclaimed weirdo. Well, in a sense, I am… Anyways please and THANK YOU!
Topic A
Describe a setting in which you have collaborated or interacted with people whose experiences and/or beliefs differ from yours. Address your initial feelings and how those feelings were or were not changed by this experience.
(I wrote about my experience as a cashier at Taco Bueno)
Topic B
Describe a circumstance, obstacle or conflict in your life, and the skills and resources you used to resolve it. Did it change you? If so, how?
(I wrote about racism in my hometown)