<p>Hi as the says I'm a transfer applicant who would like someone to read my essay I would prefer someone who is already in the college but if there are others who would like to read it that would be awesome.</p>
<p>My situation makes my application very difficult to overpass so I would need honest opinions and harsh criticism. I need my essay to stand out so don't feel bad if you tear it down. if you would like to know more about my situation just read my past posts and it'll give you all the details but I would greatly appreciate if you guys can read my essay</p>