Two Common App Transfer Essays

College Essays
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<p>Would anyone be willing to read two of my essays for the Common App? One of them is why I want to transfer, and the other is an optional essay.</p>

<p>I feel somewhat confident on the one about why I want to transfer, but I don't even know if the optional essay is appropriate...</p>

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<p>I should also warn that the optional essay hasn’t been peer-reviewed or edited, and my dad gave me some advice on the other, so there is a difference in the diction between the two.</p>