two down one to go...editors/commenters please?

<p>I've finished two essays and I have one more...before I start the third one I would like someone to edit them and HONESTLY tell me what they think. No 08 people please, and someone who is seriously capable of giving me constructive criticism...thanks! oh and just PM me</p>

<p>anyone? :-/ One is about my family's motorcycle business and how I don't exactly fit in and the other is about a painting that I grew up with.</p>

<p>bump plleeaaassseeee</p>

<p>I could help you but I'm an 08er... if you change your mind about that, PM me. Good luck!</p>

<p>okay I sent one your way! Anyone else? I don't think I'll send to any more 08-ers</p>