<p>The deadline for UC berkeley is Nov. 30 and I'm still having some problems
with my essay. Does anyone want to read it and comment???</p>
<p>if you pm me in the next hour ill read it. lol im writing a term paper that is due tomorrow and id much rather critique someone else’s writing than my own…</p>
<p>i’d read it and comment if you pm within the next 2 hrs or so~</p>
<p>i sent it to you. hope it’s not too late…
anyone else?? Can people read and critique please?</p>
<p>I can read over it/comment on it if you’d like. Just pm me.</p>
<p>thanx Linduh. it needs a lot of work, I’m still working on the conclusion, but I don’t know if my overall structure is good, and i need to just basically clean out the unnecessary parts.</p>
<p>Sure, pm me</p>