UC essay help! Just read and tell me your opinion!

[milkpuddingx]

Hi there,

I’ve finally finalised my drafts and I’m ready to send my application. However, I would like a second opinion on my essays (or if they’re good to go). Please comment and I’ll send you my essay! Thanks!

I’m applying to:
UC Berkeley
UCLA
UCSD
UCI

[snackpack02]

Sure

[ayyyyyyy]

Ok, PM me.

[Salutation]

I will be glad to! PM me.

[Archlion]

I’ll read it if you want.

[MrAccountant]

I’ll take a look