<p>Can someone just look over this one and tell me what you think?
Applying to:
UC Berkeley
UCLA
UCSD
UC Davis</p>
<p>I'll read it</p>
<p>fosho, i just finished applying to those same skools. i'd be glad to help. just pm to me.</p>
<p>bump. any more readers? its greatly appreciated. sending in apps soon.</p>
<p>send me. those are the same exact schools im applying to!</p>
<p>I'm willing to look over. PM me.</p>
<p>I'll take a look. Send them to me :)</p>
<p>hey i'm applying to those same exact schools too! anyways i already sent my essay to you, so i'll be glad to read and revise your essay. PM it to me!</p>
<p>bump. last minute suggestions</p>
<p>i can if your still looking.</p>
<p>last bump. sending them in VERY soon... any help would be appreciated.</p>