UC essay. Need help revising/edditing. Experience only plz, no 08

<p>please message me if you are willing to read/revise, and give contructive criticism on a very personal UC essay. Only the 1st question is answered. reply and I will email it. thanks a lot. please only experienced/older people reply</p>

<p>lol anyone that wants to read it. the first UC question. It's about my life, pretty personal but hopefully AWESOME!</p>

<p>...bump bump... lol</p>

<p>why not, pm it over. besides, i thought that was the 2nd prompt?</p>

<p>sure i guess i can pm it over. im' currently working on the second question. I have the "describe the world" one finished, thats what i need editing on. I'm still writing the second prompt</p>

<p>just finished second prompt too, so if you're willing I could use some advice. thx a lot : )</p>

<p>pm it over.</p>