UC Essay

College Essays
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<p>Does anyone want to give me criticism on my UC essay? I am mostly looking for help with making it more clear for those computer-illiterate adcoms who I will no doubt have read my essay, as it is about programming.</p>

<p>Also, it is currently 628 words long and the suggested amount is 600. Is this within the "going over the limit" limit?</p>

<p>Send PM to recieve</p>

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<p>your word count is fine</p>

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<p>I'll check it out</p>

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<p>i have free time</p>

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<p>bump</p>

<p>im on right now if you want to read it immediately</p>

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<p>sure pm it over</p>

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<p>i'll read it and certainly response</p>

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<p>hey if you want I'll take a look at it too</p>

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<p>pm me. (10char....)</p>

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<p>I'll read too.</p>

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<p>sure, want to do mutal? I'm willing to read over your throughly and offer up comments and ideas. your PM is full also</p>

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<p>ill take a look</p>

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<p>I can look</p>

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<p>pm me. i'll help you shave it down.</p>

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<p>efficientprorastinator : your inbox is full. I am trying to send a PM</p>

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<p>I'll take a look.</p>

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<p>i would be glad to take a look~</p>

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<p>give me <a href="mailto:manuhegde@hotmail.com">manuhegde@hotmail.com</a></p>

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<p>I saw your thread and would love to read your essay and give feedback...
PM me..</p>