UC Essays feedback

<p>Hey, I was wondering if anyone would be willing to look over my UC essays. They're still pretty rough, but I'd like to hear some feedback. Preferably no 09ers.</p>

<p>Thanks in advance, I really appreciate it. :)</p>

<p>Applying to Berkeley, LA, SD and Irvine.</p>

<p>I'll gladly read it. PM me.</p>

<p>as will I, PM me</p>

<p>Sure, I'll take a look and give you feedback if you'd like. I'm an 09er but I have already submitted my UC app. PM me.</p>

<p>I will be glad to look over it... pm me.</p>

<p>Sure, I will read it over and give you some good critiques! I'm an 09'er, but I already finished both of my essays and thinking about to submit it by Thursday. Pm your essay to me. Thanks!</p>

<p>I'm willing to read your essay. You can PM it if you want. :)</p>