Would someone (who preferably has experience in these kinds of essays) be willing to look at my UC essays for both prompts and give honest feedback?
Also, on a kind of side note:
Is it true that the UC essays shouldn’t be on the creative side?
Can anyone give an example of a successful UC essay? I’ve looked at the ones on the Essay Hell blog, but I’m not sure what UC schools those were accepted to, other than the Davis student’s essay.