<p>I revised my essay after people gave me some feedbacks but I think the sentence structures and grammer of my essay are still kind of bad..
Can anyone fix my sentence structures and correct some grammer?
I would also appreciate help of anyone willing to give me more feedback on my essay. Thanks</p>
<p>I would read and edit your essay. I am well versed in grammar and help my friends out all the time.</p>
<p>ill take a look. pm me. I'm very good at grammar, and I'm not applying for UCs.</p>
<p>if you still need your essay to be read, just pm me</p>
<p>i can take a look, pm it over.</p>
<p>if you still need people to read it, just pm me...</p>
<p>I'm here if you need</p>
<p>I'm a grammar-Nazi. Consequently, I'm pretty damn good at detecting grammar errors. I'll help <3</p>