<p>If anyone would like to proofread my essay for UCs that would be great.</p>
<p>I was trying to make it more of a descriptive essay--not so much " I do this" and "I do that"</p>
<p>But please take into consideration that this is on a touchy topic, I respect criticism but please be think about what you say.</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>
<p>jfkalfdsfds</p>
<p>sorry...my brother finds ^ amusing.</p>
<p>please...someone!</p>
<p>Hi,
I can take a look if you want :)</p>
<p>Thanks..........</p>
<p>bump........</p>
<p>I can help if you need</p>
<p>I can read it if you want</p>
<p>Sure, I'll read it. We've been reading them in my AP English class for the past month so I guess I'm pretty used to it.</p>
<p>Just send me a private message.</p>
<p>Thanks Everyone!</p>