<p>okay, i wrote about the fourth topic- cartesian coor. system. it doesn't say much about me, who i am, as a person, but it does say a lot about my views and philosophies of life. should i make it more about who i am? and my experiences with life? or just leave it the way it is? b/c somewhere, i heard that uchicago values learning, likes applicants that show a love for learning. and somewhere in my essay, that does come across. any opinions?
thanks in advance</p>
<p>Do you like the essay?</p>
<p>Yes- turn it in</p>
<p>No- change it.</p>