UChicago Personal Essay - Will Someone Take a Look?

So I’m doing the “write your own question” one, taking a bit of a risk by formatting it as a play manuscript and having my past selves and current self have a confrontation with the existential dread that drives my creative process. The question is, “Who are you?”. This would be done to showcase my strength as a creative writer (the area of study I’m applying to) and highlight my background in performance and theater art. If you’re interested and would like to take a look and make some suggestions, drop your email! Thank you!

The idea is quite good but I believe it could be better with some elaboration sort of. If you look at the questions that they listed, they added a little description or something humorous. You should add something like that to your question. And it is a good topic to talk about. Good luck with your essay.

The official title of my essay is, “Who are you? Or, a short conversation between myself, and the existential dread that drives my insomnia, as well as my creative process.”