<p>So I wrote an essay to answer the prompt "Tell the story of a road -- real, imaginary, or metaphorical". Would anyone like to read it over and let me know what they think? I'm posting this in the UChicago forum because i figured those who go to UChicago (or wish to go to UChicago) know what this school is looking for.</p>
<p>im applying '09 but i've already written mine to the "zoom in and out" prompt... i'll definitely give you advice if you send it to me tho</p>
<p>if you pm it to me, id be happy to look at it (im a first-year this year).</p>
<p>sure, i wrote mine on the "live the question" prompt so i wont be steeling any ideas or anything.</p>
<p>I'd love to take a look, why don't you PM it over...!</p>
<p>ill read it, PM it.
i did the roads one too, so you gotta read mine for me</p>
<p>ill look to. I'm zooming in and out btw</p>
<p>i'll read it-- i'm applying too, but I already did my essay (zoom in/out one)...</p>
<p>i''ll read it, pm it over.</p>
<p>btw, im applying too...if u want u can read my essay about smashing things together :P</p>
<p>you can read mine too :)</p>
<p>I know it's past the EA deadline, but I can still give you my feedback..
A few of my friends applied to UC and got in. I have read their essays, so I can compare them to yours.</p>
<p>I'll PM you mines too! (if you dont' mind)</p>