Ugh Nov 1st Essay - How easy to get 8?

<p>I think i did terrible on this :</p>

<p>4 Paragraphs ( my intro was good, my 1st Para was good, my 3rd one i had barely any time , and my conclusion wasnt that good)</p>

<p>Topic: Traditions </p>

<p>My 2 Examples Were: </p>

<p>A) Coming from India and describing the traditions we kept
B) Soccer Games and Shaking the opponents hand after each game.</p>

<p>I used a Open and Close Essay format : Meaning i started out by opening a photo album and my two topics were embedded in the album and i ended by closing the album and sinking everything in</p>

<p>Its not that great at all </p>

<p>How easy is it to get an 8? I know im gonna get Max 8 depending</p>

<p>It's pretty easy to get an 8, actually..</p>

<p>I bet you'll be fine.</p>

<p>On another note, you're the only person I've heard of so far who SUPPORTED keeping old traditions.. :p</p>

<p>Really? I thought everyone would support it . </p>

<p>I mean traditions relate back to who truly our.</p>

<p>Our roots and etc.</p>

<p>Yeah, you could approach it both ways. I opposed it with the examples of the Civil War and Fahrenheit 451..</p>

<p>its not that hard to get an 8, really
i got an 8 last yr and now when i read all that **** i laugh my ass off
examples i used were ohh so silly and kinda even primitive lol
and yours IMO are all ok</p>

<p>I said that tradition is important, but must be set aside for what is morally right.</p>

<p>hahahahaha agreed. I haven't heard a single other person who supported traditions UNDER ANY CIRCUMSTANCES. the question specifically said "are ALL established traditions....."</p>

<p>Did Pre-Enlightenment superstition deserve to be kept, even though it was all they knew?
Did slavery deserve to be kept, even though it was "deeply rooted" in our nation's origins?</p>

<p>Absolutely not.</p>

<p>nobody will judge you for your opinion
or so they say :)</p>