UIC Honors College Essay

College Essays
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<p>Hey guys! Would you help me revise my UIC Honors College essay? I wanna make sure it's as good as it can be...</p>

<p>Here's the prompt:
In its mission statement, the UIC Honors College is described as a community of scholars whose goal is to enrich the educational experience of undergraduates and allow the faculty and students of all disciplines to interact in teaching, learning, and research. How can you contribute to the Honors College community? What benefits do you expect in return?</p>

<p>Here's the essay:
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<p>Thanks so much for any feedback</p>

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<p>Bump? I’d really like some help here guys :c.</p>

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<p>wow i would recommend that you had not used the thesaurus for every other word in your essay.</p>

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<p>Yea… I kinda realize now that I should have written this essay more personally… I basically wrote it to try and impress the reader. I feel kinda like an ass :x Thanks for your harsh but truthful criticism</p>