Hey all,
I’m transferring from a CC to a state university and am unsure if my essay is any good. I was trying to put in some parts that I could personally relate to to hopefully make in interesting. I have made a couple versions of it (one with a little more humor), and this one is my more conservative effort. I was hoping someone would be willing to take a glance at it and see if it’s interesting at all, if it would be okay to send, and if they have any advice.
I’d appreciate and be grateful for any advice, and would reciprocate if anyone else has an essay they’d like me to look at. Thanks