Hey guys,
I have a really unique background and have decided that I need to include it in my common app. I would really appreciate if someone would take the time to correct the errors and provide insight on it. I don’t want to post the essay online so please PM me for more info. The story is quite intriguing and you won’t regret reading it. Thanks
Since you have already mentioned your unique background in two other threads - you studied the Quran at a madrasa for many years - there is no need to be coy about it now. 
While this is a unique background, it does not make you a non-traditional student by the definitions typically used in the US education system. You have unusual pre-collegiate training, but you are still a “traditional” applicant since you will be seeking to enter college immediately after completion of high school.
You will surely get more response to this particular question with the copy you posted in the College Essays forum.