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<p>I really want to attend University of Chicago, and after a visit and tour last week, I am going to apply EA next year. However, I have a complicated situation, and I hope the admissions officers will understand this. I have been living through child abuse for a decade, having a fatally ill father, and a mother suffering from a mental illness who has been through a pyschiatric ward twice, and maybe going on her third, plus having restrictions on the amount of time given for school work on the computer, so there have been many limitations for me throughout my life. I also want to stress in my essay that in my father's family, there have only been four college graduates in the entire family ever, including 3rd cousins ect, therefore going to college and becomming a college graduate is a very important thing for me. I also did have a cousin that attended University of Chicago a few years ago, however do to horrible circumstances, she just could not take the rigor of University of Chicago anymore and had to drop out. She is now living in the projects in the south. I want to stress to University of Chicago that I want to finnish what she had started. Although she could not finnish this school, I am determined to keep working until the end. As these are very difficult circumstances to have to have put up with throughout my life, I hope that the University of Chicago will understand this. I am also thinking of applying to Northwestern RD, Columbia RD, perhaps UPENN RD, Stanford RD, NYU RD, Carnegie Mellon RD, Tufts RD. Could you elaborate on what the rest of these colleges might make of my situation? Thanks.</p>

<p>Below, are some of my stats:</p>

<p>Gender: F</p>

<p>State: MA</p>

<p>Ethnicity: African American</p>

<p>GPA (unweighted)-3.4 </p>

<p>GPA (Weighted)- 4.17</p>

<p>SAT: Reading, 800
Math: 760
Writing: 800</p>

<p>Extra Curricular Activites: </p>

<p>9th, 10th, 11th, (and 12th for next year) member and violinst of the school orchestra
Copy editor of the school newspaper 10th grade
President and creator of my of high school STAND chapter (Students Taking Action Now: Darfur) 11th grade, and will continue till I graduate
Member of Tri-M Music Honor society- 11th grade, (and continue next year)</p>

<p>Interests in Volunteering: </p>

<p>One of the things that I am most passionate about is increasing the literacy rate for lower-income children across the nation. I am really passionate about volunteering, and am considering entering the Ameri-corps after college graduation for a year. I had tried to volunteer at non-profit organizations that were geared towards my interest in education and literacy, especially catering towards helping lower-income children in inner-cities. It is important for me to help these children, especially since I have a parent that grew up in a very low-income inner-city Boston neighborhood, and came out of the Boston public school system. I also still have family that live in poorer areas in inner-city boston, so it is close to my heart to help many of these disadvantaged children throughout the country.</p>

<p>Volunteer Work: (450 hours and counting)</p>

<p>Registration Coordinator for First Book, a non-profit organization based in D.C, which helps distribute free or reduced-priced books to lower income children across the nation. As a registration coordinator I had reached out to many different Title 1 schools, and after school programs that serve over 80% of low income children. To date, I have helped over 25 schools and after school programs including Washington D.C, New York City, and around the inner-city Boston area in Massachusetts, recieve free or reduced priced books. </p>

<p>Volunteer at an elementary school after-school program in my hometown, (11th grade and continue on in 12th grade)</p>

<p>Volunteer for Student Solutions, a non-profit organization based in North Carolina, which helps increase the literacy rate in children across America by providing literary and eduacational resources to schools in need. As a volunteer, I helped create databases of schools across the country that Student Solutions would reach out to to provide educational resources and materials to.</p>

<p>Volunteer for Nanubai, a non-profit organization based in India, which helps keep women and children in schools and India, and also helps increase the literacy rate among them. </p>

<p>Awards/Achievements:</p>

<p>Winner of First Book Registration Coordinator Challange</p>

<p>Presidents Volunteer Service Award- Gold</p>

<p>Congressional Award- Bronze Certificate</p>

<p>Congressional Award- Silver Certificate</p>

<p>Congressional Award- Gold Certificate </p>

<p>*The only problem is that I go to a really competitve high school where most people do well,( I have a class of about 360) I'm probably not going to be in the top ten percent of my class, bt maybe the top quarter, I'm not sure yet. Do you think I still might have a chance? </p>

<p>*I am also about to start my own non-profit organization called "Change for Changing Lives" that helps benefit low-income children in inner city schools and will raise money to help provide educational resources.</p>

<p>*Does it also help that my school is not diverse at all, and I'm one of the only African Americans at my school? Do colleges pay attention to that?</p>

<p>Your story is very touching- I am sure they will understand. You seem to have great credentials as well.
Wish you the best of luck! :)</p>

<p>thank you so much</p>

<p>Your GPA is pretty low but your SATs show that you’re a really bright kid. Couple that with your personal life and you should be a good applicant for UChicago, since they take the essay pretty seriously. With the top schools, its nearly impossible to know for sure, but you have a good chance at all of the schools you listed.</p>

<p>wow man. what a change from the handfuls of snobby ppl on cc…
awesome sat scores. if i had the power, i would def admit u :D</p>

<p>yeah if what ur saying’s true, u got a shot anywhere.
but there’s an apparent anomaly in your statement. You said that you are underpriviledged yet you still go to a competitive white school?</p>

<p>thanks so much everyone</p>

<p>Your credentials are excellent and I think you have a great chance with admissions. I would hesitate on mentioning in your application the cousin who dropped out of UChicago lest they think you might end up on the right track. I would try to put a positive spin on everything (as in talking about how you have overcome obstacles). </p>

<p>Have you considered applying to Duke or is it too far south for you? You seem like a good match due to Duke’s emphasis on volunteering and being involved in lots of activities. </p>

<p>I dont’ think you need to worry about being from a small competitive high school. My D went to a small competitive school also and most all the students, not just the top 10%, were accepted to good colleges. The college admissions people will mostly likely be familiar with your school. That seems to be another plus for your application that you were able to fit in and excell at a school where you are in the minority. </p>

<p>Good luck!</p>

<p>thanks, also “The college admissions people will mostly likely be familiar with your school”… very rarley does anyone at my school apply to UChicago… maybe 2 per year if that.</p>

<p>Wait…if you live in the poor parts of Boston, how did you make your way to a really competitive white school? That doesn’t add up…are you on scholarship? Bussed a long way? Just curious.
If what you’re saying is true - kudos to you, but I’m a little skeptical - this being the interwebz and all.</p>

<p>@Vertigo220h sorry for not clarifying earlier, I do not live in inner city boston, or in the city of Boston itself. I live in a predominatley white suburb outside of Boston (literally only .05% african american if that). However as I said my “family” lives in inner city Boston, I meant that my father grew up in inner city Boston and my extended family as in cousins, aunts, ect. currently lives there.</p>

<p>Ohh - that makes sence. Well, your accomplishments are certainly great and your minority status will help you tremendously. Best of luck! [: x</p>

<p>thanks 10Char</p>

<p>2360, whew, yeah you’re a shoe in, since your GPA can be explained by your story :]</p>

<p>thanks 10char</p>

<p>nvm 10 characters</p>