<p>Anyone want to read it? I think it’s pretty awesome</p>
<p>i will pm...........</p>
<p>I'll take a look. Wasn't it due last night??</p>
<p>yeah, i just like it a lot</p>
<p>I bet mine's a lot better but I will take a look anyway. So PM me if you are ready for a honest evaluation.</p>
<p>sure I'll read it</p>
<p>seems interesting. i'll read it.</p>
<p>sure pm me</p>
<p>'preciate it guys. it might be a lil wordy. i think my huntsman essay is beter</p>
<p>i want to read</p>
<p>is it like, muddled? or hard to understand? the point i wanna get across is huntsman = ben = me = love</p>
<p>i have some other ones too, that i thought were pretty creative. it feels good to send out essays after they're all done. no fear of plagiarism</p>
<p>I don't think it's particularly unique...it's good in content.. but honestly I've read many more amazing Why Penn essays...no offense.</p>
<p>Also, the first paragraph about the commonapp and thanksgiving break was really irrelevent.
Still a solid essay though - not spectacular</p>
<p>I thought it was really good actually. It flowed very well. Although you didn't say much, what you did say answered the question with passion. I somewhat agree with venus about the first-paragraph thing though.</p>
<p>Ahh, I loved my Why Penn essay, too. Not particularly creative, but I thought it did the job. XD</p>
<p>darn, well, i hoep it got the point across</p>
<p>should i just delete the first para?</p>
<p>may I read? I thought mine was rather weak and generic, but I would like to see someone's that is more creative.</p>
<p>Isn't it a bit late to be deleting the first paragraph? It was due on the first, wasn't it?</p>
<p>whoops. lol yeah</p>