<p>So yeah, like realitysucks, I also LOVE my Why Penn essay. So, I’d love it if some of you would read it, and tell me what you think. To see if my Why Penn essay really kicked a s s.
Thank you!</p>
<p>ill read...</p>
<p>I'll read it!</p>
<p>I'd like to read it</p>
<p>sure, why not, PM me</p>
<p>pm me and I'll give you some needed criticism ;P
i'm a pro</p>
<p>ok good points: you made very unique points..
constructive criticism: it was pretty damn short. =P
Also, although you showed why you liked Penn, it definitely didn't seem like you were dying to go there. I didn't see any passion... there was quirkiness and humor, but not love! Remember also that the question is why are YOU a good match for penn. A lot of people forgot to answer this question. You should have added more about your interests and how only penn will guide you to your future goals. Remember your marketing strategies: why should Penn choose you?</p>
<p>I wasn't quite convinced..</p>
<p>Also this sentence: "Reflecting this vast diversity of clubs was the diversity of the school." - is awkwardly stated. =/</p>
<p>pm me, i'll read</p>
<p>you might as well post it here, the deadline has passed so no one is going to steal your essay</p>
<p>i'll read it.. pm or if you decide to post</p>
<p>sure!!send away</p>
<p>Lemme Seeeeee</p>
<p>I'll take a look!</p>
<p>pme it over</p>
<p>pm it here :D</p>
<p>I'll definitely read it.</p>
<p>ill talke a look~</p>
<p>ill read it if you want</p>
<p>Well, lonely and lovestarved as I am, I wanna see. It had better be as lovable as you say.</p>